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Line art90

Composition85

Overall finish82

Color72

Light · edge handling　needs the most work64

My observations

The overall finish is actually good. The clearest sticking point is light and shadow — the terminator is a bit hard and the midtones lack transition. This usually isn't a lack of skill, just a missing transition workflow. Fill this in first and the piece will immediately feel more solid.

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